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9-MAY-2026 | Avis’ “Good for 20,000 Miles” Ad

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Dan Bogachek
May 09, 2026

The Vault from Copywork365

The swipe file is dead.

Literally, and maybe figuratively as well.

When I first started working on this project, I gave it the working title, Toolbox. The simple tagline was: the swipe file on roids.

But the more I worked on it, the more it became clear that this wasn’t just a box of tools. Calling it a swipe file wasn’t accurate, either. Roided up, or otherwise.

Because at its core, the swipe file is merely a collection of pictures or text. A pile, in other words.

This thing behaves more like a navigable map.

And no matter how much stuff you hoard into a swipe file, its contents are inert.

This, on the other hand, grows deeper over time. Its contents are living.

So, henceforth, this will be known as…

New illustration — credit Pranav Venkitaraman.
Big thank you to Pranav!

The Vault is an atomic copywriting database. As far as I know it’s the first of its kind, so that’s what I’m calling it.

It’s a database of world-class excerpts just like the ones we cover right here on the daily. Spanning ad copy, webpage copy, and literature.

Each excerpt is x-rayed and dissected to reveal what makes everything tick, how it works — on the most granular level. (Hence, atomic.)

It covers all the tools, techniques, and psychology we touch on here, but in their full depth. Making it easy to master these “devices” and then apply them to your own persuasive writing. You can even filter by author or brand to steal the secret sauce from your very favorite writers, copywriters, and brands.

Same as before, I’ve still got a forever deal for you.

If you join the waitlist below, you get exclusive lifetime access for an ultra-low flat fee when The Vault launches. (It’s looking like Q1 or Q2 of 2026.)

After all, a sweetheart deal is the least I can do to thank you for your support.

And as I’ve mentioned before, yes, I really do mean lifetime.

Even if the internet ceases to exist. I’ll toil day and night to make sure you receive a physical copy. With however many thousands of excerpts this accumulates over its lifetime.

Pinky promise.

Avis’ “Good for 20,000 Miles” Ad

Avis figures a car is good for 20,000 miles.

That’s not what Detroit says.

In fact, most car makers give a better warranty than that: up to 50,000 miles.

But Avis doesn’t wait that long.

Not because they don’t make them like they used to. They’re probably better. But we’re trying to save a buck.

Figure it out. We get rid of a car before the warranty is up, so Plymouth foots the bill if anything goes wrong.

Not us.

Of course, to get the best resale price, we keep our cars in creampuff condition. So when you rent from Avis you naturally get a fussed-over late model.

Does this look as if we’re trying harder just to keep you happy? Good. Let’s leave it at that. 🏁

Grade 1 on the Hemingway App.

Hook with a specific number. The lowball figure gets your attention.

Then the reason why.

Then how it benefits you, the customer.

“Look, we’re openly selfish. But that means you get the best deal, too. 😉”