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28-OCT-2025 | Avis’ “It’s for our own good” Ad


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Avis’ “It’s for our own good” Ad
If you find a cigarette butt in an Avis car, complain. It’s for our own good.
We need your help to get ahead.
Avis is only No. 2 in rent a cars. So we have to try harder.
Even if it’s only a marked-up map in the glove compartment or you waited longer than you felt you should, please don’t shrug it off.
Bug us.
Our people will understand. They’ve been briefed.
They know we can’t afford to hand you anything less than a new car like a lively, super-torque Ford. And it’s got to be immaculate, inside and out.
Otherwise, make a noise.
A Mr. Meadow of New York did.
He searched and came up with a gum wrapper. 🏁

The classic subversion hook. “Don’t feel guilty — we need this.”
Longer sentences and paragraphs for illustration. Short ones for point-making.
A soft CTA to finish us off with a little wink. “Maybe you’ll get lucky too and find something — try us.”
