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19-NOV-2025 | Excerpts from Sainsbury’s Bruised Potato Ad

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Excerpt from Bill Bernbach’s 1947 Agency Letter

Can you tell which potato is badly bruised?

Neither can Sainsbury’s.

The potato on the top was the villain but you’d never have known just by looking.

It was harvested in frosty conditions and bruised beneath the skin where you can’t see.

And what you can’t see we can’t see either.

So at Sainsbury’s we’ve had to find another way round the problem.

It’s called prevention.

We buy our potatoes direct from a select group of growers and we lay down very strict conditions.

And whether you buy King Edwards, Maris Piper or Desiree (to name but three) you can be sure of one thing.

Their beauty will be more than skin deep. 🏁

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