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5-JAN-2026 | The Hans Brinker Budget Hotel’s “Improve Your Immune System” Ad

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Dan Bogachek
January 05, 2026

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The Hans Brinker Budget Hotel’s “Improve Your Immune System” Ad

A reminder to not take yourself so seriously. Done right, you gift your reader a moment of escape through humor, and it comes at no one’s expense.

IMPROVE YOUR IMMUNE SYSTEM.

Attention Clean Freaks! You are making the world too clean. Your immune system is in danger. We need contact with dirt to build up natural resistance to harmful bacteria. For this reason, the Hans Brinker Budget Hotel is proud to be dirty and carry a wide variety of bacteria. Just one night’s stay will give your immune system the boost it needs to remain effective. Visit before it’s too late. 🏁

  • Hook: command your reader. “IMPROVE YOUR IMMUNE SYSTEM.”

  • Get specific and label your reader’s identity — even if it’s assumed. “Attention Clean Freaks!” Plus — if a label is intriguing and specific enough, even if you’re not a clean freak — your interest is piqued regardless.

  • All written in “you,” except for the choice “we”. Which is perfect, because it adds a bit of: “we’re doing this for all of our sakes, it’s the common good, really!”

  • Subversion of expectations: “we’re dirty on purpose.” Half of comedy is surprise.

  • Punchline → double down + command your reader. “Visit before it’s too late.” The faux urgency is melodramatic on purpose, it’s self-aware 😉